The Zoo Trip

On Wednesday, my class filled the marble jar.   

When we went to the zoo, I was in Mrs Thomson's group.
First, we went to see the fluffy monkeys that were hanging upside down and  being funny.

When we got to a table, we sat down and had morning tea. 
When Mrs Thomson went around the corner, there was a door that led to a room of birds then we stopped. A kaka landed on Mr Brosnan, then on Mackenzie then it finally landed on me.

I giggled.
When we got to the giraffes, we all had a photo with them.

When we got to the classroom, we saw a rhino horn.

Narrative

It was a sunny day. Taylor and Josh asked their mum ,

“Can we see the giraffes?” 

Their mum said OK and told them to  meet her at the waterfall so they could have lunch. 
They ran off to the giraffe enclosure but  the giraffes were not there. 
'Maybe they are having a swim,' thought Taylor, so they ran over to the other side.They were not there either.

“Where are they?”  asked Taylor.

Josh didn't know either.  
Suddenly, they saw the giraffe run past, so Josh and Taylor rang the zoo keeper. He said that he would be there as quick as he could. 

When the zoo-keeper got there with his long black net, he put the net over  the giraffe's long neck. 
When they got back to the waterfall, they said, “That was a long day.”